Hello! I'm ZodiacRain. I've been playing this game for quite awhile, and I've probably spent more time writing stories for the game then actually playing it. Most of my stories center around the Strangetown characters Tank and Johnny, and around pairing them in particular. I probably won't post any of those stories here, though. I actually didn't ( Read more... )

Hey guys!

I've had a chapter of my story sitting aside for a while because the ending was driving me insane. I have it posted now, but I'm still not happy with the way I worded it. It got to a point where I just wanted to get it posted and done with.

I'm going to keep it how it is. I think it gets the picture across, just not very well. I wanted to ( Read more... )

Hello! My name's Amelia, and I'm going into my senior year of high school. In my free time I like to write, draw, and follow the news.

I've been working on a story about the pre-made sim families called The Capp Family Legacy (despite the title, it is not a legacy challenge story). I was hoping some of you could review what I've written so far, and ( Read more... )

I figure it's time that I finally put my own community to use. Here are the prologue and first three chapters of Our Lives, the story I began mid-2009 before a computer crash forced me into a hiatus ( Read more... )

Only a short bit of practice first person writing this time. I'd like some C/C on whether it sounds alright. Mainly watching if I swap between tenses. I have a habit of missing things like that.

Anything else you guys want to add, go ahead. :)

Word count: 230
Picture count: 3

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Word Count: 312
Picture Count: 7

I would like C/C on my grammar and sentence structure (flow).
I'm trying out some different things with the quality of the pictures. If you want to suggest anything I could do to improve (Pics or text) please feel free!
(I am aware of the corniness of the beginning. I'm Aussie and all I know of American UNI is from Sims ( Read more... )

Hi everyone! Back again for more help. I've gotten to the point in my story I've decided to bring "Bella" back to life and back to Pleasantview. However, I think I've kinda botched it up. Seems a bit cliche to me. I could use some help maybe punching up the writing so it don't sound so tiresome.

Here it is:
( need a re-write here. )

Hi all. This is the first chapter of the story I've been working on. I'm not really concerned with grammar or spelling, as much as these two points ( Read more... )